All Comments on 'Silenced'

by lily7008

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 11 years ago
Very, very good.

For a first submission - under this name, at least - this was quite exceptional, a well-written, confident piece that was as thrilling as it was literate; again, very well done, lily7008, and please have five stars with my compliments!

LadyPartsLadyPartsover 11 years ago
Enjoyed this a lot.

I particularly like the theme of forced healing through forced risk taking. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
moving

It took me three attempts to completely read this short tale, as it really hits close to home. This is just the sort of loving D/s a sub-switch like me hopes for and rarely, if ever, knows. I found this story generative for purposes of growth and reflection, and am grateful to its author.

evrythingmusic1evrythingmusic1almost 11 years ago
Awesome:)

I really liked it, great job. Will you write more about her overcoming the fears she talked about?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Yes it was a risk, with a side helping of violation of trust. The push was too much and too fast. Coming out the other side so rosy is a fantasy.

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