by RaeVanMorlock
Ever read a story to the end, hoping that somehow, somewhere it would get better and be worth the read? Unfortunately, this wasn't one of those stories.
The concept and thought process of this dribble is beyond words.
What a complete waste of time reading this story, as it was neither believable, erotic, or even stimulating at times.
Complete and utter dribble.
What a waste of electrons. I don't know if sex ever happened. It was lost when Mr. 23-year old, Mr. College Educated, wanted to meet Santa.
It's your life. Keep wasting it. That makes one less jackass to compete against for a job.
23 years old and believe in santa okeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey
1/5 srry
A college boy believing in Santa? ok... he should have watched the aunt fuck santa too! he should have fucked both his mom and his aunt. instead, he goes to sleep. no pussyeating? just a feedback.
I agree with firedwolf54 was that all son couldn't haver enjoyed it waste of time writing it
no score