All Comments on 'Silent Slave Chronicles 02'

nutmeat? orbs? you don't need a new synonym every time you refer to a body part, it really distracts and make it sound worse than it possibly is. I rarely give -ve feedback, but your stories both seemed ok but I couldnt concentrate on the action due to your poor words for balls and breasts. Find a few decent, not comical, words for each and stick to them is my advice. This offering seems better in that regard than part one which I remember giving up on very quickly.

Also there's a few spelling errors sac, oop, etc, and commas missing here and there. worth signing up for a editor possibly, because the bulk of it looks great & we need more femdom writers here.