All Comments on 'Silent Snapshot'

Not a bad little story but you mar it by mistakes of various kinds. Ex: ordered (should be order); to (should be too as in also); politely said (a case of the misplaced modifier - should be said politely); there (should be their, the possessive form).

Don't mean to be harsh but mistakes like these can ruin a decent plot line.

Just like in real life! Would like to get my "paws" on Sarah!

the ending seems a bit abrupt. What happens next? Does Sarah leave her car and reconnect with Michael? Im guessing there will be a continuation - wouldn't mind seeing Hektor again, though.