All Comments on 'Silky's Valentine's Party'

by maggie2002

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
silky smooth~

he may have 'died and gone to heaven'

but so did I <grin> capital reading

hey maggie long time~

great ... no wait ... paramount story~

this story has it all romance, erotic, sex

and most of all Valentines, excellent tale

good luck and happy lovers day~ (~_*)

Art~

QuillmanQuillmanover 19 years ago
wonderful

I have a few years to go yet until Im this age, but when I am I hope its something like this! A delightful story, well done and thank you

BiBigirlBiBigirlover 19 years ago
Woman of my dreams

Silky is the woman of my dreams! I am just the right age, with just enough experience to be in romantic, erotic heaven with a woman like her

Michael

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
such a shame

I truly was going to rate this very highly and then the english and spelling starts to get sloppy. SHe licked under his tentacles? that lost it for me....too bad,,,,had good potential

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Sensuous but a lil sloppy

Mag, it was a wonderful story, but the spelling and grammar and yes, tentacles, made me laugh so hard I lost the mood. Please, please, next time run it by an editor before submitting. Otherwise, a sexy tale. Overall, I enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Silky's Party

The lady throws one hell of a party. This horny 'ol sailor wouldn't mind being the guest.

chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Very Entertaining Love Story****

With some real mature sex!! Thanks for sharing.

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