by coaster2
A couple of questions. 1) All is obviously not what it appears to be with his deceased wife. So, will you address her past some more, specifically what were the pictures she was looking at the night she died? 2) Will her past with the step brother be addressed and was the meeting with "clients" more than meets the eye? Looking forward to the next installment. I am hesitant to grade the story so far, hard to make up my mind. I guess a 4 so far. Thanks for sharing with us. Oh yeah, and the disguises?
Interesting just as the reader thinks they know where this story is going it takes a turn in another direction.
I like the depth of characters, the fluid story line and the occasional surprise!
Why did the step brother send the photographs? Doesn't quite fit in with the detectives description of his actions.
Apart from that as usual a great story.
the brother did not seem to care so why send the images?
the break with christie is "too easy:m considering the history, love and time.
rose, see too obvious as the next potential love intrest... so don't do it
Hard not to be annoyed by the late addition of characters to close out a story line; felt like I had just wasted my time to that point. Also, why kill off Diane just to develop her character post-mortem?
There are just too many details of Diane that are unexplained. Rose's reaction also seems strange for a person who occupies such an important position in the businesses.
Thanks, author, for solving Diane's murder in the first pages. I can leave this boring saga now. Yes, it was unsatisfactory and some things are still unexplained, but I'm not staying! Bye!