All Comments on 'Silver City Blues'

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TootsallTootsallover 3 years ago

Basic story is fun but the problem is this....a Corolla is front wheel drive.

HypoxiaHypoxiaover 3 years agoAuthor
re: Tootsall -- oops

Thanks for pointing that out. Didn't I say up front that "details may not be accurate"? As can be seen, I possess little expertise re: modern motor vehicles. I should have placed them in something else. But what's done is done, unless I edit it so Juanita wrecks the front linkages or oil pan or something. But then it would be disqualified as a contest entry, which drives views of my other stories. What to do, what to do? Nothing, I guess. Go with the flow. Accept my many imperfections. Ommmmm...

barcomberbarcomberover 3 years ago

Most enjoyable, sex not anatomically detailed,nice chage.

Sorry, Tootsall, Corolla was rear wheel drive till early 80s,I recall hiring one on a visit to US in 1982 from an outfit called Rent a Wreck. *

HypoxiaHypoxiaover 3 years agoAuthor
Thanks, barcomber

Yes, this was a fairly 'soft' story, more of a group-aided romance than a stroker. It suited my mood the day I wrote it. I sometimes tire of medical anatomy and go for feelings -- although Ken is apparently still too unstable for a pet. A non-contest sequel may emerge, complete with Golden Retriever.

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