All Comments on 'Silya & The Dragon'

by Godsilk

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
nice

Hope u go on.its an intresting beginning and deres still a lot of story to be told

LunarLilithLunarLilithalmost 9 years ago
Great start

A great start to the story. I look forward to reading more.

chop2005chop2005almost 9 years ago

Is there gonna be more? I was really diggin this.

tabbymidnitetabbymidnitealmost 9 years ago
Very well told

Oh please write more really enjoyed the story. Great start. Please continue looks like a page Turner. Have a great day!!

bearsladybearsladyalmost 9 years ago

I'm interested in reading more. You have a nice story started.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Good start

I really like the beginning of this story and hope you continue. It would be great to see the husband and brothers punished :)

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxalmost 9 years ago

And? AND?

Oooooh...so good!!!

Itgirl58Itgirl58almost 9 years ago
I like this

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
that's it?

Story doesn't go anywhere.

GodsilkGodsilkalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Work in Progress

There will definitely be more. =)

I have already submitted chapter 2. Chapter 3 is complete, but I'm refining it and it hasn't been submitted yet.

I hope you keep reading as more chapters are published.

Thank you for your votes and feedback!

KamattlockKamattlockalmost 9 years ago
Good start

Very good start nice setup can't wait to read the next chapter.

rightbankrightbankalmost 9 years ago
so many possibilities

so many directions for this to go

FaithWhiteFaithWhitealmost 9 years ago
Good beginning

Loving the possibilities of this story. Look forward to reading more.

Just a spelling mistake that bugged me. When her hands are tied up she doesn't have bounds but bonds. Bounds means leaps and bonds means they are tied up.

urbancowbowurbancowbowalmost 9 years ago
awesome

for a fiction story it was awesome I look forward to reading more

Subjectdelta227Subjectdelta227over 4 years ago
An old admirer...

A handful of years ago, i had read your story back when it was only 3 parts. I loved it dearly and wanted more. Years had passed and i had put the story in the back of my mind. But just a couple of days ago, i had the urge to find it again, and what do i see? Youve added more parts and added great depth to the two main characters! I love the new additions!

Ramjet57Ramjet57almost 2 years ago

OK, decent start of a story. Assholes taking a female to die by a dragon. Despicable, I say.

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