All Comments on 'Simon Pendleton Ch. 03'

Thanks for the great story - well written, nicely paced, well developed characters. But I am perplexed by your statement, "I'm glad this is finally done." You have left several strings untied - Simon's sister needs to be taken care of, there's the relationship between Sasha and Jodi to resolve - and a great opportunity for a HOT threesome, Jodi still has that pesky cherry - there's quite a bit left to write - maybe little sis will join Jodi and Sasha and Sebastian - what a party! Write On!

Sorry if there was any confusion. When I said this was done, I meant this chapter not this story. I still have several more chapters planned.

This was a great start. Please keep it going. There is so much that you left open that would make for several more interesting chapters including the sister, Jodi's earlier explorations with other girls, her comment of no fooling around unless I say so, and maybe even the mother. I can't wait for the next installment.

You seem like a much more experienced writer. Please keep writing. I am reading all your works unless you have BDSM, gay male, non-human. I will just skip over those types of stories.

This is erotic literature. The plot/subplots have progressed in a logical fashion. The characters (psychologically, psychiatrically, physically and emotionally) are believable. Finally, the sexual content is what one would expect in real life. 5 stars.