All Comments on 'Simon Pendleton Ch. 05'

Frankly, Violence and Rape are not what I look for in a Literotica story. Were they listed as the categories for your story I would not have read it, nor rated it.

You have ability as a writer and do not need to mis-label your stories.

To Anonymous: I'm sorry you feel that way. I'm trying to write a story not simply a stroke fest. Sometimes violence happens. I want this series to have as much of a realistic feeling as possible. It's not always happy or fun.

(I'm beginning to really hate Roxanne, though ... I'm just sayin'.)

This is probably one of the most completely and comprehensively developed story I have read on this site. The plot/subplots flow logically. The language reflects real life conversations people might have. The psychological, emotional and physical actions/reactions of the characters are true to life and thus believable. This is a complex story written by a literary athor. Remains a 5 star series.