All Comments on 'Simple Song Pt. 01'

I hope the rest of the story comes quickly.

(also, watch the then/than thing, but that was the only mistake I noticed.)

All I can say is that I am looking forward impatiently for your further contribution.

Thank you

This is terrific. I can't wait for more

I enjoy reading your stories. Thank you for sharing.

Superstar!!!!

I love with your car

Wow,

This is probably not only my favorite from you but top five ever from this site! Your sense of humor, your storytelling, your characters... their insecurities... unbelievable! Plus I am 54 y.o and have only recently been diagnosed with attention deficit disorder and your description of John just hits home so much (even if my behavior was masked and much more subtle)... you have incredible versatility and yet it seems that there is still something definitely you about each distinctive story... like a signature. I will say it again, I am thoroughly enjoying your stories!

This is the second offering from you I have read and I'm not dissaponted there is so much I love about it. Particularly how they are with each other, it's so sweet, cut and innocent. You capture the flush of first love and the nervous excitement really well.

wow can any one dream up this crappy tale

Lovely tale of ungainly high school romance.