Simple Song Pt. 02

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As they started, Wippy quickly began to tire. The last session had taken something out of her, so she ended up lying flat on the bed on her stomach as he stroked in and out of her. That change somehow enhanced the sensations that he was sending through her body. And when he slipped and fell on top of her at one point, it told Wippy what she really wanted.

"Jack... lower..."

John responded by trying to change the angle he was using. He was confused.

Wippy gave a squeal of displeasure.

"No... on top... lay... on top... of me..." John understood it this time, and rested most of his body weight on her back.

It was divine. She could feel the sensations from his penetration and the comforting weight of his body pressing on her, holding her down and protecting her, at the same time. After a few minutes, she began to climax. It seemed like every muscle in her body was spasming at the same time, but at different frequencies. When she closed her eyes, she literally saw fireworks exploding.

And then she went limp.

Wippy woke up to find John holding her with a concerned look on her face. She couldn't help but giggle when she saw it. Judging by the expression, John apparently thought he had killed her.

"Jack, were you afraid that you had fucked me to death?"

"Well... uh..."

She kissed him and snuggled back into his arms. As she drifted back asleep, she could feel him give a long sigh of relief.

She did not see him pump his fist in victory.

I hope you enjoyed it! As I said, this is the second of multiple parts (at least four). The next one will have some tough times for John, Wippy shouldn't get to have all of the fun. I honestly don't know when the next one will be ready.

This is one story that I intend to continue to work on, both in writing new sections and in improving the ones already written. Recommendations or comments are good.

Be Kind, Please Rewind.

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AnAncientAnAncientalmost 3 years ago

Please start writing again!

I once saw a girl near the local university walking with some friends. She was flat chested, but looked very feminine and desirable. She was obviously intelligent, lively, and had air of confidence. I only saw her for about 20 seconds. If I'd been single and more age appropriate... As it is, I was probably about 3 times her age and very definitely married.

A woman does not need big tits to be attractive!

SampkyangSampkyangabout 8 years ago
From a 5* 1st chapter to 1* for ch2

WOW what a build up in chapter 1 to a true love romance then totally let down! How in the hell did she go from innocent virgin to living the life of a slut? Even the first time sex with jacky played down her still being a virgin if she was...SO the poor dear was traumatized by a common problem of mom wanting her to do her best and a very common problem of being scared of first time sex??? It would have made more sense if John broke down and went off the deep end. the story only evolved into a fuck session NOT LOVE...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Next one please.

Liked the story. but you were wrong in some parts. i dont know how ADD is diffirent from ADHD but i have the latter and you have failed to grasp how my mind thinks.

I was rather suprised that i stook with this story. if it was any of the chity chity bang bang ones, i would have quit. but somehow having a charachter that could understand me drawn me to this story and i just cant believ im writing this long comment. i wanna read more of it if you add more story and with less sex. maybe i could help you with the ADHD mindset kinda thing. would be glad. can writers comment in ther stories? maybye i can find your email? or if youre a girl i could take you out but i dont think thats the case. goodbye. hope you have a good one. i certainly dont. and add something with roses an candle. complete turn on for me. maybe many reAders out there too?

greyflashgreyflashabout 9 years ago
More I hope

I noticed no new stories for over a year. I know life gets in the way but I hope that you are able to continue Wippy & John's story soon.

yankeecatladyyankeecatladyover 10 years ago
Wonderful

Beautiful story. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

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