by CalyPy
Sorry, I'm being petulant. I just enjoy your story so much, and I hate waiting. So I'm a little grumpy. Forgive me. and keep 'em coming! I'll try to be more patient.
This just keeps getting better and better. You've done really well expanding and growing your characters personalities as well as adding layers to the story.
Your writing has improved a great deal since your first story. Kinda makes me wonder what your next story and the ones after that will be like. I can't wait to find out.
A fascinating take on the were world, it's such an intriguing journey, you can read past the language slip ups. Keep up the good work, 5 stars all the way !!!!!
Love the combination of romance and danger in this post. Luna is starting to live up to her name. Can't wait to see what her wolf can do! :)