All Comments on 'Sin City Mysteries'

You write clearly with no waste of dialogue

Extend the series to a genre

djb

You wrote marvelously, and I enjoyed it very much. Very grateful to you for writing this story. Look forward to more. Hugs, Randi.

Typed the ai backwards. Sorry.

forget your StarWars or SF, Sin City is where its at, TK U MLJ LV NV

It made me cry. Just beautiful.

That is comprehensible anyway. Nice writing-love the descriptive writing, but not enough to make me want to wxplore your writing more in depth.

Of course it had an ending! She died when she killed him, now her spirit and Henri's are together!

I had hoped that when the gun wavered that the shot missed her heart. I was also sad that Betsy was killed; I could see them riding off together!

Excellent story, five stars.

I would’ve preferred a longer story with more concrete resolution at the end. Four stars.

Too odd for my taste. I'm sure those who like it have a special understanding of its significance. Congratulations.

Wish we new more about Luke and the bonds. Wish the security detail was a bit more competent. The writing is flawlessly executed. It is a good yarn that leaves me wanting more.