All Comments on 'Sin of Vanity Ch. 01'

by Belongs2Beth

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazing

Loved this story! Even better then the previous series. Please continue soon!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
What a crock

of barnyard manure this silly story was.

kathyann0026tskathyann0026tsalmost 11 years ago
Too long

Belongs2Beth, hon. Your story touches a lot of bases, but it is much to long. I mainly kept on reading it to see about a sissy's castration. I wanted to read about that, to see it somehow your fiction matched what actually happened to me in real life. I'm a sissy that was castrated by my 2 live in Mistresses.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
But what she got instead?

Was Vance with a gun in his hand and a bullet through her brain as she deserved.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Lets hear More

I would like to see more written on this one. Need to finish and let the readers know how it turned out after you sold him into slavery.

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