by Sirs_Good_Girl_
As an old married man, your story had me thinking and laughing out loud.Hope to read much more. Truely the balance of humor and sexiness .One very very minor point there is a rough break in the first part of chapter #1 where the story stops.And suddely jumps back to married and honeymoon start the tale again. Not bad but I had stop and sort of rewind. PL EASE do keep your story coming.THANK YOU !
You have left this story hanging for way too long. It deserves an ending. It's a good story and it would be nice to see it completed. I'm one reader who is interested in knowing how the date night continued and if they ever "converted" their friends.
Now be a good girl and add the next section for us.