by Amelius
I like this, it looks like it could be a fun story. If you have more, I hope you submit it. :)
<P>I read evanslily's comments in AH and all I would add is her advice to me some time ago to read lots of other GOOD stories and learn from them. All of her advice is good advice.</P>
<P>Now please submit chapter 2. :-) </P>