All Comments on 'Siren Ch. 02-03'

Now things are getting exciting. Roll on 4

Here's to more from the pirates and Kenna. Keep 'em coming.

Finally some hot action! I love them together! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Okay. Next chapter. This one was great. Also, when will we get background stories? I love background stories on characters. Where did the other people on the other boat go???? Did they just leave the maid that was with Kenna in the trunk? Lol

dear eliya,

towards the last one third or so of chapter 3,it seems like watching the replay and rehash of the same kind of rape scene again and again!!...If Roland was exceptionally cute and handsome....could the ceaseless replay be suffered through?;)...perhaps still no....!!!;)...Variety is the spice of life,lady!!;)....

and non-consensual or BDSM or whatever erotica need that spice more than most things in life.....;) ask the craving hearts of all the females and males out there desperately forever searching for that unexplainable...but so dearly wanted 'magic' in sex!!;).....

........so in the coming Siren chapters may the rape(sadly since we cannot expect any other variety of sexual conquest,going by the flow of your story :l )scenes present some variety please!!;)

Is she really a siren? Will she save them from the royal navy?

Even thou she is captive I like the gentle touch of her captor in granting her some release. I think our pirate will coax the song from her lips. I doubt any man on that ship will forget she's on board. As for the crew the ship won't sail its self.

Should I go to ch 1 and discover how she came to being stripped of her clothing.

I like the misguided villain with a heart of gold trope, so I don't know if I'll do well with true cruelty and no hope of HEA. But I do like your other work, so I'm willing to give it a try.

Thanks for writing.

You are an am amazing story teller. This is seriously well written. I can't wait to read more!

This story is captivating and very well written.

….. and exceptionally well written. Looking forward to see this relationship evolve as the story develops. Suspect that our clever pirate will find that he needs her in a number of ways.