All Comments on 'Siren of Love Ch. 04'

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NicoleAmyNicoleAmyabout 12 years ago
grrr..

loving this story but i hated where u left off! Im too impatient and just want to read more now :) longer chapters would be well recieved!!

MzMagicBeautyMzMagicBeautyabout 12 years ago
Great Job !!!

Absolutely love the twist siden and pallo being gods .. I kinda had a blonde moment and said OHHHHH POsiden and Apollo.. I get it...lol

chinaxshopchinaxshopabout 12 years ago
lol you only got it now

i worked out they were apollo and posiden early on still good story though

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
woah...

was not expecting that.

great story, keep writing!

sexycelestriansexycelestrianabout 12 years agoAuthor
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Hey! sexycelestrian here. Loving the comments. They are so much fun to read. Sorry about the short chapter. I always hate when authors of my favorite books or really good books end with a cliff hanger. And now im turning into a cliff hanger author! ha. the next chapter will be longer i prommise.

EuphoriaSlam69EuphoriaSlam69about 12 years ago
Oh yes hell yes!

That Ares sounds like a badass sexy bastard! More of him please! Though I believe he'd be wasted on what's her name - oh yes Lyra ... LOL!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
If your gonna use greek gods at least get it right!

Posiden was Area's uncle not brother as well as uncle to Apollo! While yes Ares and Apollo were brothers they were both Zues's children! Other then that tho and mixing religions with gods its good!

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