by sexycelestrian
I do not know why? but this plot in your story seams familiar. I have read in the past a story very very similar to this one. But are not many stories seam similar in a way? Please continue,writing this story, to me its a mystery a good one.
on your first story. And can I say this is one hella hot first story. It's is a nice stand alone story but could just as easily be the start of a series. Either way I wish you luck as an author and will be watching for your name. And again, Congrats on the story.
really good. would like to see this as a series but it is great as a stand alone
This seems EXTREMELY to a story called Santorini Paradisio,
Never the less I LOVE this and NEED MORE!!!
agreed with previous commenter, I love love loved it but it is dang near identical to santorini paradisio.... I actually thought this was the same story and had just been renamed. Just be careful with that...
Otherwise, I really enjoyed it :) super hot! wish I could meet those boys...
Hey guys this is sexycelestrian! I know this story is so much like Santourina Pleasures but i didnt realize how much until i submitted it. Please read Siren of Love 2 and 3 because this story series is really nothing like Santourina Pleasures even though this first one is a lot like it. I apolgize to the author of Santourina Pleasures. After i read the comments i decided to read this story for the first time ever and i am shocked at how alike it is. I remember reading a story like it and that was my inspiration. I am working on a fourth one and a new story too called Zara and the Alpha but school has kept me busy so sorry i might have both in by next week.
When you said "face that was the color of chestnut brown mixed with sandy blonde and she had a cute button nose and light brown freckles" I kind of don't get your description is she tanned or something. Is that what your string to say, or are you trying to say she a light skinned African American female. Sorry I just really like to have a pretty accurate image of a character I'm reading about.
The story is sexy and good. The grammatical and spelling errors are very distracting. Have someone edit it for you!