by PaulGerard
Hmmmmm , really strange . This has gotten cartoon like . Milk from nowhere , somersaulting boobs , a dick going out her chest . All right I still enjoyed it and really want to see how the hell you pull this all together . I do prefer the earlier chapters .
Hi, author’s answer: Yep, this upped the weirdness to 11, and it was one of the chapters I really struggled with, writing-wise. It's a bridge (or a crutch ...) on the way to the big finish, and I'm afraid it shows. The final installment is in the queue already; it should be appearing within days.