by Bakeboss
take on the "cuck" theme. Of course, since you're not married it's not really but it might as well be. I think it could have been even better if more time was spent having sis draw big brother under her control through humiliation and cfnm involving her girl friends before the ultimate humiliation of cleaning her well fucked cunt. You could use a little closer editing too but on plot alone you deserve a five!
Pathetic story, that looks as if it had been written by by a frustrated teenager. Utter dross.
Incest category stories should always be about loving relationships. If you want to write this kind of crap submit it to the fetish, bdsm or junk category.
Full of errors, beginning with 'accidently' - what sort of dictionary would that come from? SerboCroat, perhaps, but not English. Get an editor, someone who knows English better than you. . . shouldn't be too hard to find. Freddy
I'll not read another word you've written; first & last right here.
the description of what he came home to find was great! What disrespect she showed him!
most guys would have just thrown her out and called the parents to tell them why before she could call crying about it. total waste of time and the sites space needs to be deleted so others don't waste their time on it.
Spank the shit out of your little sister and let her know who's the boss. It might help if you "accidentally" happened to have some pictures of her having sex with the black guy or anyone else. I'm sure the threat to tell Mom would be enough to keep her in line. Otherwise, failing all else, give her a black eye and tell her to knock it off.
Complete waste of time. No plot, basically. His personality is seriously screwed up, and his sister is seriously screwed up in a variety of ways.
Wish my sis had those feelings .. she could have had me do ANYTHING.
think someone needs to come into reality no way any older brother would let their sister walk on them like that more like shed get her butt spanked and put in her place sad sad story learn a little more reality