All Comments on 'Sissy Cuckold & The Old Bull Ch. 01'

please....

Your jumping back and forth from third person to first person narrative was completely confusing and you definitely need to proof read your work. On the bright side I think that there is lots of potential with this story.

who writes to piss people off and idiots like me comment on it, in the end i can only feel sorry for this person they are not very bright.

I skipped over most of it after that - and went to the extremely sick ending before giving it 1*

porn should be nasty and crude, it should be over the top hotter than normal live normally is. Keep on writing! the story could be longer...

What's even worse? This is your first chapter. Do yourself and us a favor and don't write anything.

Ever.

This is fetish moron.Nothing to do with Loving Wives. Believe it or not most people will finf this repugnant. Which it is 1* because I cnnot give you less No chapter 2 is needed

who writes to piss people off and idiots like me comment on it, in the end i can only feel sorry for this person they are not very bright.

WE ALL feel sorry for the idiot who wrote that. S/He's not very bright too.

Writers life blood . Shall we suggest it's next meal be rat poison.

SM belongs in BDSM.

Why would she (even at size 14, a young woman can find vigorous and good-looking bulls for her procreation purposes) would she select an 'old' ugly fat-guy of questionable IQ and social potential? Why keep Hubby at all? Is he the Sissy Heir to a fortune? Not mentioned!

If a woman is unhappy with her Hubby, why chose to create a child (who is likely to have similar attributes to the bio-dad?) Hubby may be gone in a year or so ... Baby will stick around a LONG time! Why would Sweetie deliberately strap herself with raising an ugly turkey?

There is NOTHING about this story which makes ANY sense!

Last WHY! WHY would an author waste HOURS drafting a story whose ONLY apparent purpose is irritating unknown readers for about 15 minutes?

Yeah, 15 minutes ... Chapters 2 thru 14 wii NOT be read (by very many!)

1*

Possibly in wrong cat. but ignore the complaints and continue but in other cat.

Like most stories on here it was written as fiction to give enjoyment to others, if others do not like it let them point us to their brilliant offerings so we can enjoy the writing and spelling perfection (or read a paper) and until then shut the f,,, up.

The author completely misses the heart of the matter as regards cuckoldry which is that a true cuckold derives sexual satisfaction from seeing his wife ravaged by a lover and by being humiliated by them. He acheives gratification by masturbating as his wife is being fucked and he may often go to great length to provide lovers for his wife in order to fulfill their unusual desires. The husband is usually depicted as having a tiny penis but this is not necessarily so. He simply gets more satisfaction from watching someone else fuck his willing wife and from being made to clean up the "cream pie" and perhaps perform fellatio on her lover, than he does from fucking her himself.

It's a perverted relationship but one that is consensual between the wife and the husband.

Not a forced relationship as depicted here.

Loved it!

Then again, maybe not. Ugh.

Only had to read a little of it to see it is garbage and not even good outhouse paper.

A previous commenter noted this story was in the wrong category. Is there one for "Dog Poop Disposal"?

...not because I have a problem with cliched cuckold stories (I can't imagine why all those flamers keep reading stuff that they qualify as dog poop -- maybe it's because dog poop is what they really like) but because you change the narrator from "He" to "I" in the middle (paragraphs 5 and 8) and then back again. This is a form of disrespect for the reader. It shows that you aren't really paying attention to your story, so why should I?

I remember our first time with a real man , I to was at first humuliated at the way my wife shouted out with joy as she finaly had her first climax. He was huge and made so much cum. I thought I would die of shane as he forced me to clean her and could bnot believe how she then orderd me to clean his cock. What was worse she held my head as he fucked me and unloaded a huge cum in my mouth. She did get pregnant and he still comes over to fuck us both but she loves me and he lets me have sex with her when he is away. you other commenters are just mean and don't know what it is like to have a 3 inch dick and cum before satisfying your wife. iif you did you would welcome the chance for your wife to have climaxes and thank the man who helps you,

Use his teeth. Bite that pecker so hard that it'd be months or years, if ever, before he could use it again.

by a faggot

Cuckolds, and mostly sissy cuckolds need to learn their place and chores. One is to clean the wife's pussy or ass. Two is cleaning the studs cock as a thank you and try to get him hard for round two. Three, if the bull wants to also breed the sissy cuckold, he can and should breed the wimp. Cuckold should always be in chastity. This is not for cuckold, it is for Stud and cuckold's wife. Stud will own her married pussy. Own her body. He is nothing but a clean up boy and sometimes a tight pussy boy to fuck and breed like the stud breeds the wife.

soon going to be in maternity knickers with this potent bull spunking her fertile twat all the time you will get to see her tummy puffed up with this old mans baby inside your wife great fucking

You sound like my kind of guy. wish you were taking care of my wifes needs and I was doing clean up on you both. I would resist you at first but thaty is so you will hit me around and put me in my place, on the floor at your feet. I would cry as you rip my panties from me and take my boipussy but would then beg you to impregnate me with your sperm. I can't keep my hand off my little dick and must cum while reading your comment. Thank you

bull shit story

I didn't mind the beginning and the wife getting hammered but not into the stuff at the end. I see chapter two in gay male where it should be. Perhaps a warning at the start might be nice or should have put the end of chapter one for chapter two.

great story hope hes fucking knocked her belly up as you watched funny how much spunk his old cock loaded into your wifes hot sexy twat bet shes looking forward to being pregnant by him

I don't know why but I always think it is sooo funny when a black man humiliates a sissy white husband!

To everyone getting upset over this material... it is fantasy. It is hot, and nasty and vulgar and FUN. Keep writing.

how much I wish I was the husband...

And I want to be the husband. Feeling humiliated and degraded is so exciting

LOVED IT WOULD LOVE FOR IT TO HAPPEN TO ME I WOULD LOVE TO HAVE A BULL WITH A HUGE COCK AN SHE WOULD TO

The only problem I had with it is the sissy boi trying to dictate to the bull that he should not impregnate his wife. That's not realistic. If you are a cuckold who has been unable to get the job done, it's only natural for the bull to do it. Plus, it's an awfully hot cuckold fantasy to live out, raising the other man's child, as well as letting him fuck your wife.

I should know. My cuckold husband is not a sissy, but I am his slut, fucking whoever, wherever for him, usually his friends and coworkers. Although sometimes I make him wear frilly panties around other men, to signify who is the cuckold, when the real men are in the house. We have always gone bareback, so it only made sense, when we wanted to have a family, for me to go off the pill and play baby roulette. We have three children from other men. While my husband enjoys sloppy seconds, and I would have liked to have a child by him, being a cuckold, he gets more pleasure watching me get fucked than fucking me himself. Between the bulls and their children, our house looks like the United Nations, lol.

The old Bull puts his dick into Hubby's mouth and brings back a bloody stump! Are you kidding me? Any man that is stupid enough to stick his dick into a man's mouth that isn't receptive deserves to lose his dick. And once his wife has a baby and the DNA shows that it's the Bulls'? Hubby gets a divorce and the Bull pays to raise his kid. This was just a god-awful stupid story. Even for fiction it was laugh out loud dumb!

one thing quite true though us cuckolds main thrill is someone fucking our wives never mind perhaps he will get to need it, also thick sticky spunk is great and the taste is always good no matter how strong and bitter. Bet after a few swallows he will not only gey used to it but get to crave the stronger the the better.

Absolut geile Geschichte bitte fortsetzen

My wife and I would love to have a black bull put a baby in her belly. That was a great story. I would love to watch and be the clean up guy. Mine is small and she wants something big and black. If any one is interested hit us up on our hot mail. Thanks johnnyrealle

Regardless of what category, i loved it and have had a similar real life experience many years ago, (without the cross dressing) bu it brought me to the sissy, domestic servant, cuckold sissy slut i am today.

Thank you for the raw power of this Bull's cock!

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wow!!!

great story!!

waiting fore MORE!!

love the cruality...especially cocsucking

i have a little cock and would love for my wife to experience a huge piece of man meat that could fulfill her dreams! I would especially love to be the cleanup sissy too! I want to feel that big cock stretching my sissy pussy too!

Only someone like the sissy husband can understand the need he has for this old man. I understand completely. 4yourpleasureiam