by Anon729
Not in a long time has a tale aroused me this much. Playing with my nipples made it hard to keep scrolling.
I need more of this.
Any thoughts on chapter 2 or points on how to improve this story are welcomed!
Please continue it as a nightmare. I love him being blackmailed its such a turn on
When Richard pulled his cock out and put it in his mouth? Guess what? He came back with a bloody stump. And while he was jumping around in pain, the video he had was mysteriously erased from his phone. The rest of this was just nonsense. Any time an author thinks about forcing someone to suck a cock I just have to laugh. Teeth are sharp and the human jaw is powerful. Idiotic story.
The reason no one ever goes Last House on the Left in these stories is that the person being "forced" to suck cock is actually giving in to subconscious desires and discovering their true selves in the process. Otherwise, this would be a noncon story. As it is, the sissy fantasy that led to nightmare will probably lead to dawn and...not a metamorphosis, but the beginning of a struggle to reconcile his two halves.
Given Richard's proclivities, he would probably force the groom to pleasure him during the wedding reception and force him to put on the pink panties prior to returning to the reception. Chapter 2 could end with the bride and groom entering the limousine and the groom terrified of the moment when his bride discovers what he's wearing. From there, you could take the story in several directions.
I was thinking that maybe the next day Richard texts James and gets him to let him into the hotel room. Makes him wear Rosie's beautiful silk bridal lingerie and offers him a deal, if he doesn't enjoy being fucked like a slut then he'll let him go, if he does then he will make him his personal sissy bitch because it's what he obviously craves even if he won't admit it...
What do you think?
How delicious. Now, where is my old school girl costume :-)
Marie
Really really good story. Great concept and well delivered. Best story I had read on here for a while. 5 stars all the way!
What is epically stupid is bullshit anonymous machismo posted in the comments of a sissy blackmail story. Really sissy? You'd bite that guys dick off and erase the video? After dressing like a school girl slut and sucking off a tranny stripper? I call bullshit on that. Have you ever heard of the cloud? Or pass codes on phones? Not to mention that all of this is a Fantasy! You would open up and service that real man's cock like a good little bitch cause that is exactly what you are. Are you the same anonymous moron who posted on My Sister's Boyfriend by kinkypotato? If so please go away and stop using the internet. You don't understand the world enough. Hopefully your parents take away your internet privileges. No one should ever listen to anonymous haters. That being said... Decent spelling, passable grammar and pretty good story structure. I recommend rereading your stories a few times before submission rather than just relying on grammar or spell check. Can't wait for the next installment.
I suppose its too late to make Richard black? lol. I really enjoyed it. Keep it up. And if i was you i wouldn't add Rosie to the sexual equation, at least not yet.
I can't believe this is your only story! Please please please post more! I want to see what Rosie gets forced to do next!
in which nominally-heterosexual men go gay. I like an element of humiliation - the gay act can't be some furtive thing off on the side that no one knows about - he has to be "outed" in front of a friend, relative, coworker, etc.
It's been a while since yuo posted, so maybe you've abandoned this story, but for guys like me, in Chapter 2 James' "shame" will be revealed to his friends. Richard will humiliate him in front of them, and they'll join the party.
Sooner or later, Richard uses James' wimpy submissiveness to get back together with Rosie. James is first complicit in his own cuckolding. Then Rosie's right there with James, calming him down, when Richard takes James' cherry.
Don Elliott.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=789392&page=submissions
This is one of my favorites on the site, and definitely my favorite that doesn't involve chastity or mind control! Well done!
would love to be blackmailed this way, i love cock and being dominated.. I love my Master Peter A.
HOT! Hot, Hot, Hot, Hot, HOT!!! A fantasy of mine too! I would LOVE to have an opportunity to go out dressed in girls clothes, having an excuse that is believable, like in this story! Then being in a position to suck off some stranger, thinking no one would know. I didn't expect this story to take such a turn though!
Getting caught and blackmailed!!! That has always scared me. Becoming someone's bitch or cocksucker has always turned me on. I just don't want it to be someone that knows me! I've been very discreet about my sexuality and thoughts.
HOT! Hot, Hot, Hot, Hot, HOT!!! A fantasy of mine too! I would LOVE to have an opportunity to go out dressed in girl's clothes, having an excuse that is believable, like in this story! Then being in a position to suck off some stranger, thinking no one would know. I didn't expect this story to take such a turn though!
Getting caught and blackmailed!!! That has always scared me. Becoming someone's bitch or cocksucker has always turned me on. I just don't want it to be someone that knows me! I've been very discreet about my sexuality and thoughts.