by sissymark79
Very hot and well-written. We're getting to find out playfully a bit more about our central couple. You are a magnificent sissy. I can hardly wait for the date. Tony sounds hot.
xoxo,
Mistress Di
Love it going well. Just keeps getting better and love the sound of tony. Why do annon critics actually think its real life omg.
Please feel free to provide helpful criticism - perhaps the pace needs picking up - or making suggestions (you'd like more or less humiliation), but please refrain from simply writing 'this is crap'. That doesn't help me improve the story.
Because of that it's hard to find fault with the story. You have a good eye for description which is a plus.
I wish he felt good about himself. That's all. He got his fantasy for real.