by Slappy101
I for one am glad you rushed this to post and didn't see any errors that detracted from the well done story. Great buildup and climax... I'd love to see how the meeting with Mom and Dad goes, especially Mom.
This was a great story. It's so rare to have black folks in taboo stories. It was well written and had a nice flow. I hope there is more . Please let there be MORE .
Thank you both for the comments, I hope to see more. I'm about a quarter to halfway done with a second part that I hope you will all enjoy. Thanks again, very appreciated!
Wow. Very nice. A few typos, but for the amount of time you wrote it in very nice. Can't wait for more! It had me so wet my chair was soaked. Why haven't more people commented!?