by Satyropan
Frustraitingly I wish the author had gone further,and have Sister and Brother become sibling lovers,instead of just a blowjob quicky,the author had the potential to have their dreams come true.But even if this is the end it was a nice build-up,and even tho we didn't get a proper ending doesn't mean we can't fantasize and have the siblings fall in love and wind up becoming boyfriend and girlfriend and eventually run off and get married and have lots of incestuous babies to carry on the tradition.
One big error. Said you only had lez sex and then all of a sudden you say you leta BOY FUCK ME. Build up with your female sex and nothing with being FUCKED MY A GUY.
MOVED FROM A 5 to a 2.
Should have written more about your brother
Content was good but...even a sequel to this story would be great
Hope you write some more ...
Keep at it.
Watched loads of porn tonight, but that got me hard like nothing else before...
this was a good story as far as it went but it sure was a shitty place to end it this demands a second or third chapter don't be lazy finish what you started
I hope they share their bodies with each other and become so much in love that they don't to separate.
I cant stand to be near My sister. No I dont want sex with her, just want her to be nice.....Anyway, Great story. Didnt seem the sister got anything out of it. Is it pleasurable to give a headjob? I wont ever know, I'm not going to stick a dick in my mouth to find out.