by ArjenRoan
I wish Rachel was my sister.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Where are you going to take us.
You really do put a new dimension to this with the (non)religious aspects so pronounced. Interesting psychology going here besides the pure sexual stuff. Well written.
This is the most fantastic piece of porn I've ever read. I'm Mormon and have had sex outside of marriage. In fact, I lost my virginity to one of my sisters. Everything you've written here is amazing. I've gotten off to it several times now. Thank you ... I hope you write more!
I'm all for breaking mindless connections to domineering religions, but the way this story is unfolding (so far), and not being Mormon, I find I can't enjoy it as much as I would like.
To other readers: read this story and decide for yourselves. Don't let me influence you.