by AgentMichael
This story has such a great storyline, can't wait for the next chapter.
Maybe an overused word, but I really like where this story seems to be going! More please seconded!
That two highly unusual looking people, i.e.; black hair with silver shocks and purple eyes, don't recognize each other, knowing with whom their dates are with each other? They because they looked eye to eye during his performance at the gallery. He saw her purple eyes looking back at him. Then there's Clair, whom apparently thinks nothing of two people she knows with said striking and unusual looks. She clearly can't put 2 and 2 together. Now add Chris to that and this whole story doesn't hold up.
Please, If I'm missing something, let me know.
This is a really 'neat' story and I hope there are
many more chapters to come.
I quite liked your story, it is an interesting twist on the problem of incest.
Please, continue! A lot of people are waiting for this.
I get so tired of this you have a good story and just stop to many writers on this site do this so please finish the story.