All Comments on 'Sister Crystals'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great job.

Nice build up, good characters, terrific story, erotic payoffs and good writing. Thanks for a top notch EMC story.

sglewsglewabout 9 years ago
Great story

Five star, really enjoyed it. Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Best story ive ever read

The story was told perfectly and with no distractions. I can't wait for more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Best erotica I've read

the language was evoking, without being too base. I loved it.

YKN4949YKN4949about 9 years ago
Really Good

You managed to get a plausible (if magical) premise together in a short period of time. Nothing felt forced. And it was really hot.

Mims227Mims227almost 9 years ago

I love all of your stories

LenaptLenaptover 8 years ago
Lovely Story! 5*****STARS

Lovely!

5*****STARS to ALL yours loving Stories!

Aunt Helena

SweaterpuppiesFSweaterpuppiesFabout 8 years ago
Liked it a lot

Parts of this was so amazing :) Really made me smile, loved the starting beach scene. The buildup was so nice too. It would so have been nice if by the end they would lose the necklines without noticing it and just kept going, but that would have been too cheesy an ending I guess :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Okay story, but could use a bit more plotting: sisters

put on magic have necklaces, have sex, take off necklaces, wonder why they had sex, put magic necklaces and have sex. No explanation of why, or how heterosexual non-incestuous sisters reconcile the change in their life, or where it all ends up, or motivation of shop keeper.

queenoftheworld34queenoftheworld34over 2 years ago

I like it but....

Basically what Anonymous said.

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