by Fuzzypen
Nice build up, good characters, terrific story, erotic payoffs and good writing. Thanks for a top notch EMC story.
The story was told perfectly and with no distractions. I can't wait for more from you.
the language was evoking, without being too base. I loved it.
You managed to get a plausible (if magical) premise together in a short period of time. Nothing felt forced. And it was really hot.
Lovely!
5*****STARS to ALL yours loving Stories!
Aunt Helena
Parts of this was so amazing :) Really made me smile, loved the starting beach scene. The buildup was so nice too. It would so have been nice if by the end they would lose the necklines without noticing it and just kept going, but that would have been too cheesy an ending I guess :D
put on magic have necklaces, have sex, take off necklaces, wonder why they had sex, put magic necklaces and have sex. No explanation of why, or how heterosexual non-incestuous sisters reconcile the change in their life, or where it all ends up, or motivation of shop keeper.