by calibeachgirl
This has possibilities - will read another chapter when I get back from work!
briliant first part love the story line. and the awesome writing of it,
your good no doubt a bout that,
Gentle sexy opening. The phone spy. Brave Of course she fancies the guy. .
Just wondering...did you get the name "Sister Golder Hair Delight" from a song? I don't know the name of the song, but I hear it a lot on the oldies radio station. Hearing the song made me think this story.
A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.