by calibeachgirl
Please don't let anything bad happen to them. You're speaking as if the man is dead, or in some type of permanent coma.
I like the story, so I've given you fives all the way, but in all honesty, you do need an editor.
Shopping and sex, are you my wife's long lost sister?? Did I run into you at Las Vegas premium outlets this past July??
"God hadn't been listening to me then and he doesn't seem to be listening to me now."