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Phxray54Phxray54over 13 years ago
Character development

The characters Robert & Sayomi seem more real than Alessa and Maria. The physical characteristics of R & S, while stated, were not as graphic as A & M. That gave me a more realistic feel to this chapter. The other chapters seemed based in fantasy than realisty. While A & M are your main characters for Sister Golden Hair, the characters of Robert & Sayomi certainly have the potential for their own story. Obviously my tastes are toward reality than fantasy but be assured I'll keep reading. Your daily chapters are much appreciated.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
new story?

new people

new romance

yes, they are at least incidentally related to the primary story.

yes, we have seen these people in the verbiage.

but, shouldn't this be a stand-alone story?

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