All Comments on 'Sister In Law'

Sounds like you have more of a story to tell!

that's how Al Affairs should be like. Fun and Done when Over, with no hurt feelings.

Damn, such a well written and very detailed story !! It is great to read a story like this and have such a naughty and arousing story line in detail. The emotions and physical actions spelled out; SIL sex is what many men and women would crave and cherish afterwards. I cannot wait to see what happens next, thank you !!

Well written and tastefully done

Spare us, please.

If our spouses are suspicious, they've never confronted us.

Your stories are very creative and descriptive but you really should set them aside for a couple of weeks and re-read them before publishing them, I would also recommend that you collaborate with a professional editor, who will correct your grammatical errors before they are trotted out for public viewing.

Ignore those who criticise your writing but do not have the courage to do so under their own name but please take note of constructive criticism when it is offered.

Why only one per year? Why not a swap?

This turned me on so much

Smoking killed it for me. Big turn off. 1*

Nice storyline, think about having them meeting every month instead of annually. Sometimes possibly even at the SIL's home when her husband is away on business. The BIL could use the excuse that he would be away on a golf or fishing outing with business acquaintances, for whatever length their tryst would be.