All Comments on 'Sister-In-Law Affection Ch. 01'

the incest????????????????

1 star for wrong catagory

Is that the incest involves the two sisters, and with the closing statements of the author; will happen later invthe story. I figure that the author put it in here because the story in whole will contain incest. Even if the first chapter doesn't.

I think your story was great. These things happen and they both knew what was going on; it was sex play and Ashley was the one who decided to jerk him off and obviously knew with many men in her life what would happen.

I think you can take the story to a new level and have Ashley lead him to where she wants to take it. Please write another chapter and expand your story. Thanks !

I can see that the author tried to continually suggest incest but this did not happen within the story. You should have placed this into another category. i gave it 3 stars as it has potential. Keep writing...

you people forget the part after the '/' this would qualify as taboo, so it is in the correct area.

OK he fucked his girfriends sister where is the incest/taboo in that? No big deal he wanted her she wanted him it was just sex.

If he was married it would just be cheating with his sister-in-law.

Thanks for your comments folks. It's correct to say that this chapter has no incest in it. I was thinking it would qualify under taboo until the rest of the story could be told. It's a slow start I admit, hopefully I can get the continuing story out before too long.

This story is clearly Taboo.

I thought this was one of the better stories I have read in awhile. I really enjoy stories where the person you want is the one person you can't have. I can't wait for more. You made the attraction seem real and the events that put them over the edge were believable. Sadly all too rare.

And screw that category police. The whole idea is that the two lovers can't break the taboo of being with each other.

Hey guys, i just want to clarify that Incest and Taboo dont mean the same thing, Taboo is just a word for All things society frowns upon i.e cheating on your girlfriend with her sister ;) so .... It is very much in the right category

What a great, straightforward storytelling style.

And good use of language.

Makes me want to keep reading.

Paul in Oklahoma