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All Comments on 'Sister in Law Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
I've read worse

I think.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
go on

where does it go?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
So where does it go

Story is Good but leaving eveyone Hanging with No End.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Get a Proof-Reader!!

You may have written an impressive number of stories but all those that I've read contain numerous silly errors that a good Proof-Reader would have removed for you.

For instance - "Where back little sweaty. "

Firstly, it should have been "We're" not "Where" and secondly it should have been 'sweety', not 'sweaty'!

Two errors in a single sentence of just four words! Now that IS impressive!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Finish story

This is really good, please finish the story. This could go all kind of places.6

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When you send an email enter an email address for a reply. I will often write a story by request. You will find more of my stories on Smashwords, by Gary Bingham Thank you to all on Literotica for the opportunity to publish stories and for readers comments as that has improv...