All Comments on 'Sister in Law Ch. 04'

I have voted on the three previous chapters but this is the first chapter I have commented on.

A great story so far, but with short chapters and a long period of time between them it makes it hard to stay up with the story.

Although the last chapter was good enough to stand alone and be interesting, it would be better if the whole story could be posted together.

Thanks

It was a thin and short chapter written in haste.

Nothing excited about the story and the plot.