All Comments on 'Sister-In-Law Joins the Hike'

Where's the incest? Is that in part 2?

Kudos for writing a story that is interesting...I bet that Elizabeth and Dave were "making pictures" of their own.

How about a foursome for Part 2?

Thanks!

I enjoyed the build-up but, the description of the act was a little brief. I don't think you knew how you wanted to finish the story. The finish was way too short and cut things off.

Good story.

And I agree that good old Mike isn't the only cock Liz has been sampling.... Maybe with Dave's blessing! But without the sequel.... we'll never know.

Nice and crisp story with all the action one needs.

Really enjoyed reading. Is it a true story?

I love your writing style.

Kindly post more of your stories please.

Why do you keep switching between past and present tense? Learn how to write.

I bet your wife was with her sisters husband as well so you guys just swapped partners.

First, and for most, you need a proofreader. Grammar is very bad. Story line was good, and Dave fucked your wife in a motel next to the mall; no doubt in anyone's mind. Then you download the pics on Liz's laptop, but leave your camera on a counter in the kitchen, and Dave gets a viewing he didn't expect, shows it to Carol, and you tell us what happened next. But what ever you do, get one of them to proofread your writing, so we can enough your stories more, please! EDITING is just as important, especially if you are sharing your work with us. Keep writing.

XYZ