All Comments on 'Sister-in-law's Computer'

by Gr8funtoy4u

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
proof reading

Decent little story but you must get into spell checking! It would definitly HELP!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nice Story

Nice story, I enjoyed it. I have several sister in laws I wouldn't mind putting my dick into. Oh and I'm the computer guy in the family as well. Thanks for the story.

don87654don87654over 17 years ago
Very erotic!

This story needs proof-reading badly. But it was good and I'm wondering if maybe your sister-in-law and husband were trying to get pregnant and he didn't have those little fishies in him so she was using you?

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Gimmick.

Everyone needs a calling card and computer skills are as good as any where a hot sister-in-law is involved. So...what's next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Let down

By very poor spelling.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
syntax

"move up mine leg " this is not English. sorry, too much of this in your piece.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Ok

Get a decent spell and grammar checker or an editor it detracts from the storyn!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great storyline

Needs editing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Comments speak for themselves.

ukrainianukrainianover 1 year ago

Editor required. Short and hot but plenty of mistakes. Added to my read again list. Thanks.

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