All Comments on 'Sister-in-Law's Penalty'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Really hot idea but pompous writing style. 6/10.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
So when Janice goes to the hospital

And has the bruises from the spanking documented and the rape kit done, what did you think was going to happen? He's going to prison for a long, long, long time. Idiotic story with no thought given to the consequences.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
The Stupidity

of both Anons should be grounds for sending them back for two (2) more years of Freshman and Sophomore English!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I wish he would

This author is a nut. Lol

zex95966zex95966almost 2 years ago

Not sure why you’re getting such dislike for the story, I’ve definitely read far worse!

An aftermath might have been nice, he blew his load it sounds like unprotected, and maybe she ends up pregnant?

Does her behavior change afterwords? I could see it going either way she changes and acts more respectfully, or even better IMO she pushes his buttons more and he keeps needing to give her the medicine.

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