by Ethan
I love where this is heading. I'm 62 and don't think I will be around another 17 years for chapter 3 so please hurry.
You really need to write chapter 3. This guy is so lucky! Please hurry!
Good story. Hot and interesting. What will happen next? Will there be a trio? And with Don and Chet, what's going to happen?
Please, I am also almost 61, do not have us waiting another 17 years for Chapter 3!
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.
hope you will add another chapter
17 years between episodes! Both really good. Welcome back.
being that it took 17 years to continue i was surprised at how good the two parts flowed together. A really good story so far, hope to see a next part or two... this could become a really great series of stories if you had the time to expand it.
Great story. Chapter 2 was excellent. Please continue with several more chapters.
17 years between chapters means I won't see the next one
One of the best stories I have read so far.
Like many other 'comments', please dont leave it so long between submittions.
I only hope you have more story lines ready for us all to read and enjoy :)
Funny how things come in three's...like the three of them!
Was good just didn't feel he needed anyone else. His sister should have been enough but it was still a good story and would like to read more.