All Comments on 'Sisterly Love'

Unbelievable. You DO know that periods go inside the quotations, don't you? That's if you even put one there at all.

Stop writing. You suck at it.

The writing is bad but you just don't go from but to pussy.

Good idea, but far too short for pleasure

continue

. a hurry?

Let the errors pass you by! We are here to read and enjoy. If you want to be a punctuation and grammar guru, get a job as a high school English composition teacher. Your jollies will be satisfied there.

Too hard to follow, figuring out who was speaking when, and plain juvenile in concept.

Please don't write anymore. Assuming, of course, that's what this is supposed to be.

It was a little short, however it was hot. Try to slow down and add some detail and feeling to show the build up! Please write more!

you should get the sisters to want to lactate.. seeing their breast leaking milk as u fuck them, mmmm they have tea for this and would be hot watching them leaking milk on each others pussys and both then 69 licking it mixed with cum.. mmm or squirting on the guys cock with just their milk and watch the guy cum from it being so hot..mmmm.. or get them both pregnant :P kinky

Good short story Please continue the story!!!

THAT WAS MIND BLOWING , I WAS RUBBING AND FINGERING MY PUSSY ALL THE TIME READING THE STORY

Good story to bad there was never a sequel.