All Comments on 'Sisters'

Very tight writing. Good character development. Very hot! Looking forward to the next part

If enough interest is there? Consider me interested. Bring it on.

That was hot

Hot. Wicked, wicked hot.

Supportive !

Hot story!! Definitely deserves more!

story is good please lets have more

More please!

Made very nice reading. Want more like this.

Please continue this story, and thanks for sharing it with us.

I'd love if they would entangle with their mother. Seriously.

Has to continue! But now that you mentioned the aunt, you can't leave her out. Or the mother.

Please continue. I’m dripping

Sexy and oh so very , very HOT

Got to continue PLEASE

more pls but you should add a cousion rylie because i think its a hot name

Well done Sweetie, your first story is erotic, sensual and got me horny. Thank you,

I hope you do continue with the girls adventure, keeping it spicy and seductive. Perhaps introduce the girl next door or the Ministers daughter or his wife who calls to sell redemption,but gets laid..

It’s your story girl, run with it.💖

that was so hottttttt I came and came

More may be add her friends

I could read it a thousand times and still not get enough.

Very hot loving sis. I don't get along with my sisters but this turns me on.

I'd love to hear more about the sisters!

Please write more. This was very erotic and made me horny.

Always good when the like each other. And they've known each other a long time ! Alison's sopping wet underwear accounts for the shy looking speed of the story.

The other posts should encourage you ?

Very yummy indeed! This story needs to get deeper! More please! Thank you!

Hi,

Hope you keep writing. Fantastic Beginning. I am Hot and want to hear more.

JBroadrunner

I loved this! Flustered and blushing Alison was adorable! I like Natalie taking control. Toys next? ;) Natalie using them on Alison? ;)

I love how the girls treat each other. Perhaps some more kissing and cuddling? (Yeah, my favorite activities with other girls) . Sex in interesting places together? Seduction of another girl by this pair of sisters. Maybe seduction of a favorite female faculty member? I like the suggestion of seduction of their mother, too!

I wasn't sure what I was going to get and was beyond pleasantly surprised. The flow is smooth and the girls are both soooooo cute, I love how into each other they are. The sex was 10/10. I know theres a lot more chapters and I'm really looking forward to those. Thanks for writing this :)

Invigorating and sexy..love to read more!

found your story quite be chance. I have a fascination - fantasy about my own sister and was looking for a similar situation. I saw your story and something screamed at me "READ IT"!

So I did!

I'll tell you more as I read more

M

noblegent45

🤗😘 Brilliant, Very Hot And Sexy,,, Yes!

Hallo Alison!

Your story "Sisters" is brilliant, beautifully written, very hot and sexy! ... After reading "Sisters" Ch. 01, I was on my third orgasm and about to float out of my undies, 😜 when Her Royal Majesty Queen Jackie entered saying oh Kat, this smells wonderful... what are you reading, scoot over and let me see. ... That was a nice way of saying move your ass, so I can sit down!... kneeling at Jackie's feet, and looking up her nightgown I heard, what the fuck are you waiting for an invitation, or would you prefer that I get my cane?

5-Stars and 5-Hot Yummy Orgasms!... Thank-you, for sharing your lovely stories with a couple of your new fans,

Queen Jackie and Gay Kat.

PLEASE MORE OF THIS STORY.

Only just come (or is it cum) to your writings, but very glad to see you have followed up on the first chapter. I’ve now got at least 7 more to read and hope they are all as hot as this one. So many roads two sisters can go with this now that they have crossed the taboo threshold of lesbian incest.

can't wait to read chapter two

Brief … but a good start.

I love the premise. If I had a sister, I'd want this with her as you described it.

'Please keep writing!

Great story.