All Comments on 'Sisters Ch. 03: Persistence'

Excellent as always. You are a wonderful story teller. Can't wait to find for the next chapter.

This is such a great all around story!

A most compelling collection of stories.

Love, love, LOVE the Desperado reference. And such an appropriate song for Hannah! "Your pain and your hunger, they're drivin' you home...You're losin' all your highs and lows/ Ain't it funny how the feeling goes away?...You better let somebody love you before it's too late." Such a subtle but significant detail, like in your story about amnesia when the characters go to see Memento. Excellent series, please post the next chapter soon!

Stopping at that point was most frustrating; this is a wonderful if devastating set of stories. I do so hope you will develop the stories of both Hannah and Donna further. It would be particularly wonderful if you can do it with both realism and optimism. For Hannah that is a particularly tough ask.

(PS, Am I right in thinking that "Donna" should read "Hannah" in the paragraph introducing her visit to Wes after she had met up with Donna?)

"bad accident on interstate"

I bet that's Amelia's

I don't think that would have been Amelia's accident. The events in this story include Penny's funeral, which would be about a year after A Strange Arrangement, and Amelia's accident took place about 11 years before that.

Dialogue, situations, and characters are exceptional. Well done.

Very well done. Wish you would write some new stuff!