All Comments on 'Sister's Deal'

Speaking as someone that is not a “professional” author, I thought the beginning seemed more like a rough outline rather than the finished story.

Not sure why someone gave you a 1... definitely better than that.

Wish I had a sexy sister like her.

AWESOME..both loved each other and shared what they wanted.

One problem. If GF is that small, how did brother fuck her?

Maybe ne never fucked GF.

That was amazing..... I rubbed my cock the whole time... now i need to read it again and cum ;)

Decent start but it would be better if they had names.

Let’s hope there is more....and yeah, stroking while reading this, short but HOT!

They should fuck all summer long and in the end he should send her back to school with a little something extra in her! 😈

Loved it,very good

Loved it & how descriptive you were, but the dirtier the better next time with names!

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Will sister want more?

The only thing worse than a wannabe brother seducing out of shape (Curvy is 21st century slang for obese) "live with the 'rents forever" social pariah would have been if she had rainbow dyed hair and three chins. Does your character have rainbow dyed hair and three chins?