All Comments on 'Sisters, Friends, and Lovers Ch. 33'

Fran and Ally making pornos alongside their sister Sheila? Are Steve's mom and dad opening up to maybe join in the sex adventures? And will Steve's niece and nephew have sex with him and Fran, and/or their parents before they leave the resort? Would love to see how those questions are answered.

Agreed... since the previous chapter mentioned that Steve's brother and family were there, and that his niece was requesting another session with him, I feel certain we'll have some additional loving in Steve's extended family soon.

As good as this chapter was, I definitely got the feeling that there was a lot more (maybe 1-2 chapters) that could have been made of the wedding and after party. More could have been made of Doug, Sherri and their teenage children. Sex with guests who were not part of the group were mentioned but glossed over. It would have been nice to have seen the guests enjoying something of the destination as well as each other - preferably bring the two together with some sexy Caribbean activities.

However, all this is nit picking as it is still one of the better stories I have read on Literotica.

Why bother?

Who is doing the “editing”? “ As the bridge and groom, Fran and I became…”