by Ozsunlover
I loved the BBQ part and how you wrote Karen into the act, still waiting like the rest for Karen & Tim to hook up. But you need Karen totally to go around nude for a day first then hook up with her brother then the rest of the VAL,DEB group
Thank you for the story
This is a terrific series. You're taking care to build up Tim's and Karen's characters, and to develop the situation believably. I look forward each time to the next instalment.
When your hard cock hit her tits I lost my load too! Holy shit this is really a hot story!!
I can't understand how people can reading about cheating and like it. I find it repulsive and disgusting...
What a shame ozsunlover hasn't been back. I first read this piece in 2011, and I consider it one of the best written stories in all of Literotica. It has great pace, excellent perspective, fantasy eroticism, but still in touch with the real world, and it's the work of an accomplished, mature and level headed writer. I remembered it so well that over six years later I came back to read it again.