by Ozsunlover
I like this story a lot.
This episode wasn't as hot as the previous one, but it was a logical continuation. And it only deepened my desire to read the following episodes :-)
I'm sure the selfish and self centered anonymous nay sayers will come along and try to tell you how to proceed. But rest assured, your doing very well without their input.
The highlight of my day is seeing that a new chapter is posted.
Though the writing and plot is moving along nicely. What happened there are huge sections without a blank line between pargaraphs both of multiple sentences or single line length? This makes reading difficult.
This story has really great character development and seems to be in part true. Seeing another chapter has been written is like getting an email from an old friend. While other stories on Lit are sexually hotter, and I have not come once while reading it, I have really enjoyed it and it has made me wish I was part of this group's experience. It was also nice that Karen and Tim were so comfortable that they were finally able to sleep together and to be somewhat sexual with hints of more to come. It would be nice to get a chapter in Karen's words and to see what she is really thinking about.
This is the best story I have read on here, and I ve been coming on here for over 5 years. Please keep writing, tha anticipatin is killing me.
I really look forward to the next episode of this beautifully written tale. The quality is still way beyond the average on Literotica. Never have I enjoyed any stories here more. I loved the mutual masturbation at the end.
its very intresting and writer looks very honest about the human feelings between brother sister
What a great ending to that chapter! Everything you write is so damn erotic.
Your story gets better and better. I knew this would happen, that they would end up in bed together - and that, along with the anticipaterion of this happening, really makes me fee "good"..
Thanks - Bob