All Comments on 'Sisters, Mmm, Good Friends'

...I just can't remember when!

You got to keep who you have your dick into, you are fucking Lena but are cumming into Amy make up your mind or your dicks position????????????

The plot idea is a nice (not too original, but nice) concept. The execution and writing simply sucks. Hint: read what you write before submitting it.

Could have actually been longer. But the writing, especially the use of language is above average. Take a serious look at some of the crap people write that is praised by alleged sophisticated readers.

These idiots have to be kidding! This is one hot fucking story!

I would have love to see him cum in both Amy and Lura both at the same time.

Ver y hot... A dream comes truth.

Patrick must be some talented fucker..... 3rd last paragraph has him cumming into BOTH sisters at the same time???

My wife and I have been married for 40 years. At our wedding, my wife's father said partly in jest do I want two for one. I have always been polygynous at heart and I had always told my wife of my interest. When my father-in-law said that I told him I most certainly would love that. We laughed, but as you can see I never forgot that and I have periodically referred to it over our 40 years. My sister-in-law is now single and over the course of the last 2 years, it feels like we are moving in this direction. Your story although a work of fiction I imagine hit me in a way that has stoked the flame in me which was already lit. I truly loved this story and would enjoy a follow-up.

Patrick was turned into a "boy toy".

You need someone proofing your work. The big fuck scene has you fucking them both simaltainiusly. Nice try, if you have two dicks.if you are going to write more, you need someone editing your work for grammar and spelling. Good story line. Keep writing.

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