by Darkniciad
knowing i have to wait for more, but all good things come to those that wait :D
Every chapter gets better than the last! Love the characters and the story, and can't wait for more.
I just love it can't wait for more. this is a great story. I wonder what that amulet does.
Love <3 where you went in this chapter.. brilliant, very clever missed reading you.
Seeing a new chapter made my day, and it lived up to expectations.
Thanks to everyone who commented anonymously. Glad you're enjoying the story!
Thank you for your gift of 2 chapters close together !!! I love this story and am so thrilled that you are continuing to write it (even if it takes a little longer than I'd prefer ;-) ). It's wonderful that even with the gaps that the story still flows nicely and the characters are all "the same" :)
Thanks again and can't wait for any story you give us.. love them all , but especially the Danica stories !! (hope that will offer a little inspiration to write more soon !!! ) *laughing* :) :)
I can't wait for chapter 16... I want to see how Dannica's travels go and what Zoraster has in store for Dannica's friends...
I was looking for something else than the usual 'great as always' but can't come up with anything at the moment.
Great chapter with lots of the single plot-strands moving forward and - in my opinion - start slowly merging.
Take your time with the next chapters, the wait has made many of us giddy - but it was well worth it!
Best
-Shaya
I tip my hat to you for writing a story that actually has some plot and some suspense and is actually interesting. I find myself always curious to know what will happen next.
Thank you so very much for sharing your creativity and your talent with us!
I'm really loving this story. It's better than Danica Pt I. I'm really excited about the hints about Pt. III, too :)
I'm off for a glass of wine! I hope Danica and Harkuff hook up again soon! I hope Camilla is the one who takes out Zass......and Celes takes out Camilla and if Andrea or Marlena gets hurt I am going to pout! Amazing chapter. Thanks!
I love you story. So griping and exciting. I keep trying to stop reading to go to bed and can't. Thank you, you're amazing. FYI I try to leave you 5 stars but it doesn't usually work on my phone. Do you should know your rating actually higher. Okay gotta go see what happens next...
I have been reading this story since chapter one, I just started reading about 2 weeks ago and cannot stop, there is no real reason I have decided to write this comment on this chapter other than I felt it was time to let you know how amazing this story is, even if you left out all the adult content it would still be an amazing story. Thank you for your great story and I can't wait to finish this story and then read all your other work!
The women still behave as if they live a normal live. People are dying, friends are in trouble, but what matters the most for them is sex. They deserve to get killed, maybe than they would think about bigger issues than getting laid.
'Tis Sorcery, I say, Sorcery!
Darkniciad's cast an enchantment on us with this story!